DJ Trox
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« on: February 09, 2010, 05:40:32 PM » |
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So I just had some inspiration slap me in the face to start working on choons again. So here's a sample of a new one I'm working on. I made it in Reason, for the fuck of it, I usually use Logic, and probably from here on after this tune is completed will Logic be used, reason just has such a cheese sound...... Anyway..... this again, is just a sample of some new inspiration that is coming my way. Constructive criticism is always appreciated, just remember this is no way; mixed down, completed or mastered. Just a rough feel of the new sounds coming your way, via TROX. Hope you enjoy it. More to come! **edit - final is complete! |
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« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2010, 06:01:42 PM » |
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Those are some filthy dirty wobbles you got there. Sounds good. Lookin forward to more  |
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« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2010, 06:58:08 PM » |
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Noice!
I like it already.
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« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2010, 09:16:03 PM » |
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Holy shit man, fucking nasty tune right here. Nice job on the wubs bro.  |
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DJ Trox
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« Reply #4 on: February 09, 2010, 09:25:00 PM » |
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just wait till you all hear the final!  BOOOOOOOM! any constructive criticism? |
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« Reply #5 on: February 09, 2010, 09:26:31 PM » |
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just wait till you all hear the final! BOOOOOOOM! any constructive criticism? Hmmm.... Pretty solid tune, I guess you could have a mix with vocals in it, that'd be tight. |
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« Reply #6 on: February 09, 2010, 09:58:55 PM » |
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was thinking of a VIP version with some ragga vocals in it.... we'll see if it works out or not.
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« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2010, 09:45:10 AM » |
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Good tune... definitely grimey. Don't have a whole lot of constructive criticism as this is a work in progress... most of what I have to say would be on the mix/master.
The one thing I do have to say is about the structure of the song. It all sounds really good and progresses well, except there doesn't seem to be a breathing point. At 1:20 it does kinda break down, except the sounds stay the same. So it's more like a mini break than an actual break. I think the tune would carry the energy a lot better if you had a section where it changes up... like a middle 8 or bridge or whatever you want to call it. The original theme would be re-energized when you drop it back in, by taking a break from it with the middle 8 section.
Very impressed though. Strong work, looking forward to the next!
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« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2010, 11:36:03 AM » |
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thanks man..... definitely puttin a bridge in to keep the track movin'.
Should have this done today sometime. Thanks for the feedback Crisis.
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« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2010, 11:48:11 AM » |
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word Trox. Loving the drum and bass inspired hats. I like the 2nd verse, i kinda wish the track started right there. getting the energy kicking right from the get go. It seems to lull a bit right at the drop. really like it though, very drum and bass influenced. is the track running at 77 bpm??
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« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2010, 11:53:48 AM » |
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140 BPM
I chopped up a drum n bass beat called the boymerang, that you don't hear to often these days.... love that old loop.
Alot of changes have happened since I posted this version. So the structure is quite different now, as well as the mixdown.
Stay chooned!
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« Reply #11 on: February 12, 2010, 06:43:26 PM » |
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link is down till the final is available. GET READY! |
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« Reply #12 on: February 12, 2010, 07:18:41 PM » |
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hit us with the new one cuz shit is fresssssssssssh
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« Reply #13 on: February 14, 2010, 02:08:14 PM » |
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The anticipation is killing me.
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« Reply #14 on: February 14, 2010, 09:34:29 PM » |
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The wait will be worth it.
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« Reply #15 on: February 14, 2010, 10:51:41 PM » |
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I'll give you $20 if you release the final as circus calliope music and blow everyone's mind.
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« Reply #16 on: February 15, 2010, 06:10:47 PM » |
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ok, i got a little ancy so I decided to post up a newer version for your ears. CHECK IT OUT! ....if embedded image doesn't work click my soundcloud link. still a work in progress... but.... enjoy! |
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« Reply #17 on: February 15, 2010, 06:47:21 PM » |
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Very proper. |
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« Reply #18 on: February 15, 2010, 07:08:12 PM » |
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thank you
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« Reply #19 on: February 17, 2010, 09:30:55 PM » |
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final almost complete
stay chooned
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« Reply #20 on: February 18, 2010, 06:17:14 PM » |
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final mixdown is complete like i said on my soundcloud page.... any takers on mastering this? enjoy! |
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« Reply #21 on: February 18, 2010, 06:49:34 PM » |
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The production is really good and I dig the snarly wobbles, but it just got too repetitive and boring 2 minutes in. It needs some change or evolution (not just a break), or even a trippy melody to keep my interest because there isn't enough happening or catching my ear to make me want to listen to this track more than a few times.
I waited till the song was finished to give it a listen and I think its a really good effort, you obviously know what you're doing production wise, but the song writing wasn't on the level I was expecting with the way you were over hyping it. Lots of potential there though to make it a great track.
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3 exciting moments, 2,993,753 dull ones and then you die You are a fucking retard and it's grating on my soul to attempt to read your shitty posts. No one cares that you are a lesbian. Go grow your leg hair out or something. go put your tampon in too..
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DJ Trox
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« Reply #22 on: February 18, 2010, 07:28:30 PM » |
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The production is really good and I dig the snarly wobbles, but it just got too repetitive and boring 2 minutes in. It needs some change or evolution (not just a break), or even a trippy melody to keep my interest because there isn't enough happening or catching my ear to make me want to listen to this track more than a few times.
I waited till the song was finished to give it a listen and I think its a really good effort, you obviously know what you're doing production wise, but the song writing wasn't on the level I was expecting with the way you were over hyping it. Lots of potential there though to make it a great track.
I'll admit there isn't much of a melody going on in this tune to carry it's weight the whole way, but I think that there is a lot going on for any DJ to mix this in their set. That's what my intention was when I made this. "For the DJ, by a DJ". I didn't mean to "hype it" as much as you said I did. I was just excited because this is just the beginning of some new inspiration/production techniques that I have been working on as of late. Thanks for the constructive criticism though, it is appreciated. Glad I'm finished with this choon, so I can get moving with some of my other choons. |
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