well... i gave it a listen. some constructive criticism:
it seemed a little repetitive. not much melodic content either... but maybe you were going for that. doesn't really have a variation on the theme either... like no change up in the middle. just personal preference, but i like when a song breaks in the middle and goes to something new, then returning to the original before ending. the tempo seemed a little slow, and made the song sound like it was dragging.
what style of music were you going for?
Your critique is appreciated Joe.
Several different reasons, one it confirms that I'm gettin what I want across. Secondly because you gave me some new ideas to work in.
The style if you could say that because I wasn't really shooting for anything in particular was a "mid-tempo, acid breaks kinda sound". I guess you could say.
Most Acid Breaks aren't highly melodic and are fairly repetitive with slight changes to sounds over time.
Tempo is supposed to be slower then normal hence being a mid tempo. Not something someone would play at a rave necessarily or at peak time. More of a chill area sound.
Thanks for listening and taking the time to give some critique.
